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- 800X600
what do you think of this?
- jox0
it's real nice, love that old fashioned style. But there's too much text for my taste, you actually don't read what it says, you just "look" at it, nam saying?
But what do i know.. it's nice!
- jgjh1510
I like the style.
What actual pixel dimensions do u use for a 800x600 resolution layout?
- 800X6000
i use 740 by about 550
- p1xelfrog0
yup exactly what jox said!
nice work.
:P
- jox0
tsk tsk, never any opinions of your own huh :P
- 800X6000
hmmnnn... i actually edited it down from what they supplied. sometimes it is nice to just draw a purty picture. :P
- balb0a0
it might just be my monitor, but the type at the top and bottom of the graphic frame seems extremely low contrast... almost so much that you miss it.
don't get me wrong, i'm all for subtlety... but in this case it's almost invisible.
- 800X6000
i just put it in there as texture, but i guess you're right, i should bump it up another 5% or so.
- p1xelfrog0
never ever!
:P
- jox0
whoa, i never even noticed that text. yeah bumping up is prolly a good idea.
- Gorbie0
Nice.
Puttin those House Ind. fonts to work,eh?
- balb0a0
...and not to get too nitpicky ('cause it is a really nice page), but what's that claw thing that's menacing his left ear?
is that a fragment of a word balloon?
- 800X6000
yah, i really housed it up on this one.
and yah, it's a word balloon thingy. maybe i should put in more of the bubble fading out...
- balb0a0
maybe just a bit?
...only because it tends to pull your eye into the negative space.
- sexypixel0
Id make the guy more sepia like the rest of the piece instead of black and white, he doesnt seem to fit too well
- flatulence0
I'd leave the guy black and white...I think it helps balance it against all the white text. Also, I'd try getting rid of the "claw" or word bubble simply because I think you are achieving the same effect with your placement and italic type.
Looks really good though! I like it. Looks friendly and professional. If I needed something done on my house I'd definitely give 'em a call upon seeing the ad.
- 800X6000
cool, thanks for your thoughts. like your site sexy. i'm out.
- brundlefly0
whats not to love....
trusting 50's hipster guy, clean designs, good font choices, "the claw" speech balloon didn't confuse me one bit, the copy at the top and bottom was clear as day...
Saul Good :)
- 800X6000
sweet action!
- pr20
dude, very nice, but i would never get a plumber from those guys. Sorry it doesn't look like what i would expect from a plumbing company.