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- jevad0
uh...first one is too busy - second one is better...but still needs some dev IMHO - they got type to go with it?
- atomica0
Can't really critique your logo unless we know who its for and what they're all about eh? Afterall its an identity that should encompass all that right?
- shellie0
its hard to say.
if you want the truth? i dont like either. but dont listen to me!!!!
- F_EddyShears0
some more info would help...
- matt250
Men's Golf Clothing Co called Birdie. Age range is 18-35
client likes Izod gator but wants something simpler
- 2cent0
words to live by shellie
- swollenelbow0
yeah yours needs a zing man! think negative space...that's a good start...a duck!
- F_EddyShears0
18–35 is the young crowd of golf. the more sporting crowd (if there is one). Right off the colors seem almost feminine. the shape in both is very much in the "grey" area of birds, meaning it doesn't quite look like a finch or a sparrow, nor a duck or a pidgeon, it is very "generic" in its anatomy and is not reading well as a bird. The top one reads bird more, given that the wings provide more description to the form and also is hinting at motion.
I would safely say it conveys nothing of golf, only that of a name translated in one literal way.
Perhaps integrating golf and the name in your approach.
Got a lot of work to do, luck.
- unknown0
It looks like something for pre-teen girls.
- unknown0
ya.. wrong logo for the market..
way to teenie girl looking...
- corin0
Need much more dev. in the shape of the bird. I don't mind the colour so much but the bird looks sluggish cause of its big belly. If it helps I made some birds not too long ago, just cause I hadn't used illustartor for so long and wanted to practice, and i found that birds were fucking hard to do. Birds are very dynamic animals and even when at rest they still look like they could get up and get the fuck out of dodge at any moment. Representing that with simple shapes i found to be quite difficult but i think i was on my way there. Anyway, your image reminded me of that little project so maybe my work can help u too. My birds also have a long way to go though...
- sexypixel0
haha i thought it said "logo Clit"
- save0
I haven't read any of the previous posts so I don't know anything about the brief, but at first glance I prefer logo number two. Your simple approach is far better than number one.
- matt250
thanks for the feedback - these are just the inital roughs. The colors aren't set yet. i like your birds corin
- JazX0
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- Antonelli0
idea: golf ball w/ wings
- unknown0
nice idea Antonelli
- matt250
oh i like that - maybe the body of the bird is a golf ball?
- unknown0
yup but no head... just a ball with wings