Crit me, crit me, please!
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- unknown0
personally I think the illustration is a bit weak, its on the right track but needs to be a bit more George Jetsun and drawn a bit more acurately - there seems to be an unneccessary naivety about it.
Yours Truly
The Fussy Bastard.
- piperboytoy0
thanks for the suggestions guys. I will think about the nav a bit. And make the changes. Also still haven't finished the illustration, will try to make it more interesting tho.
- jpolk0
a. duty, not dutie.
b. not a fan of the red rollovers.
c. is this actually for an airport?
- piperboytoy0
a. I know, but too lazy to change for now
b. me either, I was just playing with the nav.
c. no, it's a personal site for someone who likes to travel.
- piperboytoy0
yes I agree they are too stiff, I didn't sketch them out in the beginning. Should have but just rushed into it. I think I'll do some sketching tonight and fix that.
But I like the colors and think they are great. Thanksthis is a meaningless bump!
- smartK0
add some details to the doggie ... how about a nice pair of eyes? ( ;
- piperboytoy0
:-(
- Antonelli0
lol.
i think it looks great.
- BonSeff0
nice illustrations. looks sorta retro. i like the stewardess.. hubba hubba
the color selection is sweet too
keep on piper
- piperboytoy0
thanks guys, I was a little worried. Been staring at this for weeks, don't even know if I like it or not.
- piperboytoy0
haha, that should be funny.
- smartK0
r u making fun of me here?
or was that just a meaningless bump? ( ;
- smartK0
yeah you should do sth with the buttons ... don't know what though
the illustration is great!
- Jnr_Madison0
agree with smartK, nice ill.
- jevad0
looks sweet - it's DUTY though...
- unknown0
maybe incorporate the music player design.. into the menu... the menu is bland
- lilbabyleg0
the ills are stiff... check out chip wass (of course). colors are too contrasty... reign them in and subdue them and match them a lil better. I like the simple menus.
- longman0
looks wicked
i like somthing like this, a little bit diffent to your every day site.
looks well
- smartK0
is it just me or does "illustrations and designed" sound a bit strange?
say "illustrated and designed" or "illustrations and design"
- mennik0
nice illustration. futuristic 70's style.
menu looks indeed a bit dodgy.