Crit me, crit me, please!
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- piperboytoy
Hi, starting this design, please give me some feedback?
not sure about the navigation on top, could use some suggestions.
Also do you like the illustration?
all feedbacks are welcomed.
- piperboytoy0
:-(
- Antonelli0
lol.
i think it looks great.
- BonSeff0
nice illustrations. looks sorta retro. i like the stewardess.. hubba hubba
the color selection is sweet too
keep on piper
- piperboytoy0
thanks guys, I was a little worried. Been staring at this for weeks, don't even know if I like it or not.
- smartK0
yeah you should do sth with the buttons ... don't know what though
the illustration is great!
- Jnr_Madison0
agree with smartK, nice ill.
- jevad0
looks sweet - it's DUTY though...
- unknown0
maybe incorporate the music player design.. into the menu... the menu is bland
- longman0
looks wicked
i like somthing like this, a little bit diffent to your every day site.
looks well
- smartK0
is it just me or does "illustrations and designed" sound a bit strange?
say "illustrated and designed" or "illustrations and design"
- mennik0
nice illustration. futuristic 70's style.
menu looks indeed a bit dodgy.
- unknown0
personally I think the illustration is a bit weak, its on the right track but needs to be a bit more George Jetsun and drawn a bit more acurately - there seems to be an unneccessary naivety about it.
Yours Truly
The Fussy Bastard.
- piperboytoy0
thanks for the suggestions guys. I will think about the nav a bit. And make the changes. Also still haven't finished the illustration, will try to make it more interesting tho.
- jpolk0
a. duty, not dutie.
b. not a fan of the red rollovers.
c. is this actually for an airport?
- piperboytoy0
a. I know, but too lazy to change for now
b. me either, I was just playing with the nav.
c. no, it's a personal site for someone who likes to travel.
- smartK0
add some details to the doggie ... how about a nice pair of eyes? ( ;
- piperboytoy0
haha, that should be funny.
- smartK0
r u making fun of me here?
or was that just a meaningless bump? ( ;
- lilbabyleg0
the ills are stiff... check out chip wass (of course). colors are too contrasty... reign them in and subdue them and match them a lil better. I like the simple menus.
- piperboytoy0
yes I agree they are too stiff, I didn't sketch them out in the beginning. Should have but just rushed into it. I think I'll do some sketching tonight and fix that.
But I like the colors and think they are great. Thanksthis is a meaningless bump!