Crit: beta commercial

• Stanton

  http://users.pandora.be/vegasroc…

  i made this commercial for a coffee brand. I still need to dub it and don't mind the quality, it's filmed with a handcamera just to give the idea, it's about a boy who drunk too much and met this girl, well that's what he thought...

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• Stanton0

  sorry mac-users, i'll put an .mov-file online as soon as possible

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• abba_cadaver0

  I think the idea is pretty funny, But there are a few things i think you should think about like maybe showing the lump in the bed in the beginning so we know there is someone else with him and maybe show the coffee brand a little more clearly in the shot. Anyway those are just my thoughts. Plus that would be a pretty ballsy coffee company if they played that :)

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• Stanton0

  thanks for the comments :)

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