Crit: beta commercial
Crit: beta commercial
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- abba_cadaver0
I think the idea is pretty funny, But there are a few things i think you should think about like maybe showing the lump in the bed in the beginning so we know there is someone else with him and maybe show the coffee brand a little more clearly in the shot. Anyway those are just my thoughts. Plus that would be a pretty ballsy coffee company if they played that :)