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- ********
my students did this site for Big Brothers Big Sisters(mentoring program) i helped with the actionscript....this is for a national contest any feedback would be great..thanks in advance....
http://www.bitelp.com/bbbs
- Biofreak0
a good cause.
as for a crit... those images are a little low in quality and they dont line up at the top. but that is easily fixed. some of them are too large and this makes them seem... thrown in.
the words in the menu are a little large for my tastes and the rollovers also dont line up. they are like 2 pixels off sometimes.
the motion seems jumpy. so i'd say increase your framerate to 31fps and do some motion tweening. it will soften up everything.
last thing i see is the white space at the bottom. i dont mind white in the layout, but it looks like you just couldnt figure out what to put there... so it is white. it works with some of the pages, but on other pages, it just looks out of place.
how old are your students? just curious.
glad you are doin something for a good cause.
- mrdobolina0
didnt load for me.
- ********0
Isn't it just a dating service for paedophiles and vulnerable young kids with "issues"??
- monkeyshine0
Great organization. I agree with Bio-pix are a little fuzzy. The intro takes too long to load for my liking; I say, keep it simple.
My eye immediately gets pulled to all that white space at the bottom. Seems awkward. I'd also suggest simplifying the varied purples...a little busy.
- Biofreak0
something like that MR_T.
- unknown0
i like the intro.. the rest is simple and clear.. can't say much.
same here : fonts are too big in the menu, overall text is too big..
in fact, yes, everything is a bit too big to my tastebut at least u made something simple and unpretentious, he does the job ..
- ********0
the students range was 22-30, 4 of them, first website for an actaul client for many...the alignments are a bit sloppy and the pix had to be compressed a bit for loading puposes, the index is 240k so loader takes a while on modem and bottlenecks, it has been submitted for a contest, but for the client it will be tweaked...
- vellan0
it don't load on my mac...