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- dsmith70
thanks for all the crits. from what i gather #2 and #4 seem to be the most popular with #3 right behind them.
- dsmith70
she is paying me in love! :P
actually we're going to go out on a date on friday eve and I get to pick the movie. what a treat!
- scarabin0
4, 5
- Antonelli0
#3
how much u charging her?
- preston0
5 for hierarchy's sake
- gcabral0
wise choice..
but thin that line.. still too thick.. it's competing with the type.. it's way too much..
you can thin it out a bit and get a much better effect..
once you do that.. it will be perfect..
- pixelman0
I like #3 the moste. It's light. I don't like the black one's they are to havy.
- unknown0
......if she like late 70s design, you got a winner in any of them..........
- Sapphire0
i'll choose between #2 and #4
- Peter0
4.
Be careful with all of them though; there might be trouble with readability if you print business cards
- dsmith70
anyone else got anyother suggestions before I make the next round of changes?
- sexypixel0
3 is the most elegent. It might work well on print but on screen the font is so thin, when the circel in the 'b' meets the line it seems to get thicker and a bit muddy, get me?
- exador0
hey bud..
i'm digging 1 and 3..
nice work!
cheers...
- smartK0
#2 or #4, I like both.
- th370
Hi! I like number three -
i like it because it got the best balance and the best visual effect.
the other logo may seem a bit 'heavy' because of the black in it..it seems more organized with a line in the middle instead of a black box -
ok?!
th37
- pi0
I like #1. but I am inept so seek more educated opinions
- Duane0
#3
it's the most elegant. i think the sub text may look better in mixed case letters though. also, because it's not reversed out it will reproduce well. to have type that thin reversed out it's tough to hold a good black.
- mayo0
i still think you need to loosen the kerning on "organization through design". it looks so crammed together...and maybe try Agenda for the bottom copy.
- ok_static0
#2
but i would suggest add a small triangle to the black square, like a talking bubble to make it more playful.