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- th370
Hi! I like number three -
i like it because it got the best balance and the best visual effect.
the other logo may seem a bit 'heavy' because of the black in it..it seems more organized with a line in the middle instead of a black box -
ok?!
th37
- gcabral0
wise choice..
but thin that line.. still too thick.. it's competing with the type.. it's way too much..
you can thin it out a bit and get a much better effect..
once you do that.. it will be perfect..
- scarabin0
4, 5
- pixelman0
I like #3 the moste. It's light. I don't like the black one's they are to havy.
- kerus0
#3 works for me! clean and crisp.
the k/o ver's more than likely wont hold for print.also dont forget
lnll,
(my ascii for the_shocker)
- mayo0
i still think you need to loosen the kerning on "organization through design". it looks so crammed together...and maybe try Agenda for the bottom copy.
- exador0
hey bud..
i'm digging 1 and 3..
nice work!
cheers...
- dsmith70
anyone else got anyother suggestions before I make the next round of changes?
- dsmith70
she is paying me in love! :P
actually we're going to go out on a date on friday eve and I get to pick the movie. what a treat!
- dsmith70
thanks for all the crits. from what i gather #2 and #4 seem to be the most popular with #3 right behind them.
- smartK0
#2 or #4, I like both.
- sexypixel0
3 is the most elegent. It might work well on print but on screen the font is so thin, when the circel in the 'b' meets the line it seems to get thicker and a bit muddy, get me?
- Peter0
4.
Be careful with all of them though; there might be trouble with readability if you print business cards
- Sapphire0
i'll choose between #2 and #4
- unknown0
......if she like late 70s design, you got a winner in any of them..........
- preston0
5 for hierarchy's sake
- Antonelli0
#3
how much u charging her?
- mayo0
i like #1 and #3 the best, maybe try making the bottom copy a little smaller and airing it out some. it looks too crammed to represent "organized." if you try that, see what the bottom copy would look like a little heavier, too.
- elpueppetto0
I like # 5 & # 2 best.
Sell them as a bundle? - they both could be used by the company because of their similarity.
Good work.