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- Helvetica
http://reactive.ie/temp/var01.ht…
Your thoughts would be appreciated foaks
- Buckyball20
My initial crit is that Var. 1 & 2 just don't convey any energy or level of emotion.
The flask idea is a start but I think Var 3 is trying to hard to make the "R" out of the flask shape. Focus more on the concept and less on trying to get tricky with letter shapes.
Var 4 is the strongest. The type face is unique and has stronger lines than the Var 3. Again, the "R" might be a bit hard to read.
And if you are going to show the flask, maybe give is some life. To show the enery of a reaction.
Just my 2 cents. Rock on.
bB
- unknown0
the test tube would work best on its own maybe.... Make it more of a symbol by scaling it and placing the word undrneath..... nice though.....
- unknown0
the first option, but the arrow is almost invisible.
nice logo!
- robotron3k0
4 is the best
- prom3theus0
i vote for 4 as well, the type melting into the logo is strong.
- ok_static0
3 i think, though it's a little bit weird on the "r" of "reactive".
oh am i talking to a typeface?
- Helvetica0
Thanks lads,
but don't pack your bags yet...
Follow the link to see if I've imroved it, nailed it or lost it:
http://reactive.ie/temp/var05.ht…
- lifeinsodium0
Number 5 but with the Green. Good job!
- driftlab0
three... 3... & III.
- BonSeff0
4!
- lifeinsodium0
ok, i take that back. i like the font in number 3 better.
- unknown0
So your name is "Helvetica" eyh??
Stick to your guns then; number 3 is the real deal. Classic yes, but Loooooooooooooooong lasting and good. Good work (on nnumber 3, that is)Did I say 3?