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- unknown
i'd like some feedback on a business card design before i send it off to press.
i'm not sure about a couple details, like the color and the texture on the square on the front.
what do you guys think?
- Gorbie0
You might not want to be so cryptic in your own self promotion.
- unknown0
cryptic?
- zzzmarcus0
nice design, esp. the blue.
no email address or anything? just a phone #... details i suppose.
- rise0
"grafdsign"
some body might think your artifically inciminate girafs
- rise0
and what's with the stucco? Your doubling as designer/master plasterer?
- IloveQBN0
The url is kind of hard to read. you should keep all the information on the same side! just more convinient for clients to find your info.
I like the blue one the best
- unknown0
i'm asking for input on the design, not insults about the name of the company.
- gabe0
well it's very hard to tell that it says stuccomedia.com on there from the screenshots
i think he just assumed the card was for scarabin.net and you had represented it using the word stucco
- Sapphire0
i think "nathan corwin" is being overwhelmed by the text above it just slightly..
its still very nice
- unknown0
hmm.
thanks.
- rise0
im not insulting...
i'm just trying to figure out how the word stucco is being played off as.
- unknown0
love your site, btw, gabe.
- Sapphire0
its good
its good
its good
- aki0
i think you need to work on your type treatment, tracking, kerning etc. i find 'stucco' and where your name and number area unresolved.
- unknown0
i like it haphazard like that though.
- Danski0
Comments as you requested:
They're right, it is cryptic. It looks extremely nice on the front side but the text arrangement on the rear doesn't work for me.
You might want to line it up a bit more - I'm assuming the card is going to be handed to people who *specifically* aren't designers - they won't get clever type arrangements, and they'll become confused and angry.
Not arguing your design, just giving you my honest opinion.