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Out of context: Reply #11

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    Side 1: Try reducing the mark and 'MYOBIE' -- need more whitespace between mark and 'MYOBIE', and more whitespace on left/right edges

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    Side 2: already contains the domain name -- why repeat yourself unless the website domain is different?

    In any event, I don't think you want to put text that close to the bottom-edge of the card .. likewise the mark is too close to the top edge ..

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    Its somewhat misleading looking at the samples at that (larger-than-life) size, and the Side-2 sample is very misleading because there's no edge shown, giving the illusion of a lot of white space .. effects my perception of the composition ..

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