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yo man. good start but it needs a bit of fine tuning.
i've never been a fan of showcasing work in a browser window like that.
look at how this girl showcases her web work. so damn nice. large, clean and crisp.
http://www.peex.net/nina/also i think your color scheme needs a bit more. it's a nice simple start but i'm not sold on it. you're at the middle ground between the good simple and the bad simple, you need to push it just a bit more to get you to the good simple side ya know. maybe it's the font/text you choose.
i mean if you want to get super simple and just showcase your portfolio look at how this mofo did it. his small amount of text works on this page ya know.
http://ian.chemset.net/keep trying! i went through 9 revisions before i settled on my site (not saying its the best thing in the world, but in comparission to my first few designs it's much better).
cheers.