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    Have you considered removing the telephone and email info (place them in a 'Contact' link in the main menu)?

    Then you can move the menu up - I'd say move it up so that 'Meet Theodore' starts where 'Electronic Mail' is now ... maybe bump up the font size of the menu by 1 or 2 pixels (say, 14pixels) ...

    Might 'open' it up a bit, because the lower text-occupied area feels a little cramped in relation to the block above.

    Also, try using a softer color for the copy ("Theodore is the portfolio of ..." etc) instead of black - maybe a lighter/darker shade of blue that will complement the blue block above?

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