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  • tenpointtwo0

    I really dig the look and feel of your site. But why are the photos of your work soooooo small!?!

    This should be the MAIN FOCUS of the entire site! You have the header images bigger than your own work!

    Visually, your work seems unimportant. Which is a shame cause the work itself is good.

    I say, screw the header image. Reduce its height and dedicate your site to your work!

    And- to be even harsher (if that's a word. Which it probably isn't) the header image itself isn't all that interesting. It's a beach or an island? Who cares. Get something that actually says something. I feel like dead trees are your priority. Maybe if you were a poet, it'd be cool. But no. I like the rumpled tag. Go with it. Get a picture that compliments it. Your name at the top of the page is also terribly hard to read.

    I think you're got strong work and a nice concept. But take it all the way. Some parts are really clean design, some parts have a grungy feel. Some things are grid aligned, some are off-kilter. I think you need a unifying voice to bring it all together. You're almost there.

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