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    im sorry if there are any repeats, i havent read any comments.

    but a few fixed i think could go a long way:

    *lose the italics on your "ewing photography" header and align its left edge with the left edge of your black frame. you can also try using an un-condensed face for this header... might look better.

    *align the right edge of the navigation to the right edge of your frame

    *drop the black frame stroke 1 px, instead of 2, will clean it up a tad.. the frame looks clunky right now.

    *center your copyright info since you have all your thumbnails centered. or you could align the thumbnails/copyright info left. you could also try using a non-bold typeface for the copyright, looks a tad clunky right now

    *also, you can try using ULC (upper and lower case) text for your navigation.. might make it look a little more interesting visually. also, what typeface is that? looks like verdana or something.. maybe try Helvetica, will probably look better.

    hope this helps a little

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