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Out of context: Reply #17

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  • monNom0

    It's not very persuasive.

    at first blush, there's nothing to distinguish the site from any number of simple blogs or pages put together by amatures. It's not branded, and it doesn't sell it's self

    I'm all for minimalism and conservatism in design, but you've gotta show-off a little bit.

    If I was reviewing your portfolio, My first impression would be negative. nice work after you get in there, but 'you never get a second chance to make a first impression'

    give it some 'wow'. even just a cool background image would do. maybe use one of your photos.

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