Bible Ad Campaign
Bible Ad Campaign
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- GreedoLives0
I'd like to nitpick several minor things:
If you're going to capitalize all the words in the first frame, you have to capitalize all the other ones, too, for consistency's sake.
Jimmy Hendrix is misspelled, he's missing a 'r' from his last name. Proper names should be capitalized anyways.
Afterlife is one word.Maybe you could continue it with god's word (have like george carlin give a swearword or something), god's will (somebody's last will or something), god's instructions (ownership manual) etc.
As a concept i don't think it's bad, but it's definitely been done and needs to look a little better. Pick a better typeface, fill out the space a bit more.my 2ยข