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  • johndiggity0

    lose the splash page.

    the home page will be outdated in a couple months with the diagonals &.wood grains.

    the structure is kind of off; why are logos under print? maybe they have their own section.

    personally i don't like how the work is presented with the boxes and description and it seems to be hit or miss with whether or not there is content in a certain place. and all the work is too small when confined to the squares.

    i'd ditch the "i can do" stuff too, kind of hokey, i would hope you can do it if you are a designer.

    in the web section, sites need to open in a new window.

    that's about it for now. just my opinion, i'd scrap it and go another way.

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