site crit
site crit
Out of context: Reply #3
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- johndiggity0
i don't know... there's something about black and white... i would try to work on the type more, and refine the leaves. i think black and white lends itself to a composition dominated by type.
the window is sitting a little low on the screen too, it looks unbalanced, and that white keyline to the lower right needs to be addressed. it just seems to confined.
is this going into flash?