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- Baskerville0
I agree with what's been said before.. The leading of 'SITO NEWS" is ultra tight to the line below. Are you working with a baseline grid?
Also the main text box on the LHP is very low down, it looks very heavy, like its fallen down to the bottom of the page. The body type looks quit heavy, maybe use regular or light typeface – a serif would be good for body copy and act as a contrast to the headers.
One other thing those lines | next to the folios are a bit pointless, space will work fine, it looks a bit like pages 21 and 13 rather than 2 and 3