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    the top photo with the girl on the package is fighting with girl on the logo on the left...it seems more sense to put the nav under her logo... authentic mexican coffee is reading like a title rather than a subtitle - u know? also that stripe bkg and the crosshairs seem too techy for the product.... i liek the sculpture down on the bottom - can u make a background pattern out of soem cool mexican patterns? (or liek maybe squidfingers has something more.. i dunno "orgainic")also that pic on the bottom maybe make it a sepia instead of grey.. looks kind of dull... im not loving the color pallate but it might just be cuz im on mac.

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