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- abizzyman0
what are the boxes under the logo for? Are they going to be link modules of some sort?
I'd find a way to connect the 'authentic mexican coffee with the logo. It just seems to be floating out there by itself.
OH! Maybe try taking the black transparent area behind the 'authentic mexican coffee' and spread that black across the entire image... move the text up... and move the navigation up too. I have a feeling that your navigation is taking up a lot of space on lower resolutions. The nav is probably more than halfway down the screen.
The screen just feels really busy w/the image at the top... so if you tone that down to match the tone at the bottom... I think it'll be more balanced.1
I like the serif... I'd go with a serif for the menu too... the font needs to be more feminine. I'd also move the navigation toward the middle or even to the left.
That's my assessment.
... other than that... I think it's shit.
Start over. ;P