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    don't like it.

    COLOURS
    Cut down on the number of colours. Choose a more contemporary pallette, what you seem to have is very dull, and very studenty...

    CHARACTER
    Simplify the character or delete it completely and just have a typographic approach. Or have an abstract shot of part of a womans body.

    TYPOGRAPHY
    Change the font and lose the colours. Tighten up the kerning....

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