flyer crit
flyer crit
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- Blofeldt0
I don't like it. It looks very college student. Too busy and too heavy. I like the clothing line's name. I don't think you've really thought about doing something interesting with it or considered approaching it differently. It's a very formulaic approach you've taken and I don't think it's at all 'fashion' and does absolutley nothing for the clothes, doesn't make an impact, doesn't look interesting or build a brand.
Sorry if that sounds harsh but you asked for a crit, good luck with the next incarnation.