Our first Ad, Opinions?
Out of context: Reply #51
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- Blofeldt0
Ok. Well, this is a magazine ad right? What side of the page is it going on? because your logo might be obscured by the centre of the mag where the staples go.
I haven't been to the website but I can't really tell what your company's called from the logo. Either Inviaid or Invlaid or Invicid. That's bad because if you're asking people to visit your site to check you out and you can't remember the name then they won't ever make it.
I've no problem with teaser advertising which prompts the audience to do a bit of work, but to make the impact the answers should be on the ad, not elsewhere. I don't think it should work as a paper chase, especially if you're not a huge well know brand.
Contrary to popular opinion, I I have several problems with the illustration. The man is nice and so is the pink. But the city and circles. That confuses the issue. If you keep the man the clothes become the main attraction. Also the pink block next to his arse looks like his leg. Like he's sat on a table. The city scape and circles confuse it stylistically. 80's are hp at the moment but this side isn't. Looks kind of technophile. More confusion, what style are you trying to express.
Nice ideas but a long way and hard work to go .