critique please

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    it looks good but something about it makes my eye float around a bit much...it could be that it is very centered but a lot of the blurs make the whole layout seem fuzzy...

    maybe sharpen up the lines a bit, keep the shadow but unblur the edge...the logo type is a little blurry as well (maybe just compression on my display?)..

    dropping the intensity of the background would help...

    a nice large photo would ground the read much more as well..

    much props on the style tho...i dig it

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