critique please
critique please
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- blaw0
i'm good with the whole look, etc., but i'm a bit cautious on the approach... specifically the headline/copy.
i realize you stated your target audience, but i worry that if i were in that audience i might interpret that as either someone looking down their nose or someone just too damn goofy.
maybe it's over-sensitivity, but "to you, Coco is priceless" reads, "too normal, sane folks, your an eccentric weirdo with too much time/money".