Biz card crit
Biz card crit
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- jpolk0
1. the slanted type is driving me crazy, it looks sloppy.
a. without overlaid type, it looks like a cutting/printing error. consider rotating it backwards if you're married to the idea of it.
b. the overlaps look sloppy and due to cooper's letterforms, inconsistent.
c. far too prevalent, knock it out more.
2. you definitely need the url there, but as business cards are meant to grab new business, i'd really consider some kind of mirror domain.
a. it's too long: i would definitely not type that url or email addy , most days. fnd something shorter.
b. it's kind of irreverant if you are trying to go after mid-large sized companies.
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