crit it up, please.
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Please don't hate me for this, but:
On some of the images in your storyboard I can see copy that reads:
"There could perhaps be a short paragraph of information here"
"some sort of heading here"
...and the likes.
I can't help to think that for some parts of the site you are designing before you know what information you want to reviel there.
The information on the site has a function, and you know what they say about design and function. One suggestion I have is, (if you haven't already) perhaps you can map out exactly what you want to inform to the user. Or actualy, try to sort out all the stuff that the user doesn't need to see, and then design.
Of course you might already have done this. I'm just guessing from the mockup texts. Also, I've been known to be an ass.