vormburo text crit
vormburo text crit
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- mitsu0
it's a bit wordy... almost feel like i'm running out of breath if i say it out loud. sorry, i'm bad critic - i would wreak havoc with a red pen on anyones work... :(
also, should 'work' be 'works'?