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  • mitsu0

    Regarding the following:

    "We aim to find eye-opening solutions for our clients"

    This sounds a little cliche. A bit too reminiscent of corporate lingo associated with the dot-com era. Plus it's a claim that any company could make about their services/products, so I would suggest removing it, or substituting it with something that isn't so generic. Does that make any sense?

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