vormburo text crit
vormburo text crit
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Specialists in traditional and new media are enlisted by Vormburo to satisfy the projects' demands and to avoid deviation from the original concept by technical limitations.
might sound better as...
Vormburo work with a range of specialists in traditional and new media to ensure the technical and creative demands of a original concept are not limited by our personal skill set.
Not perfect though, definitely some room for improvement in my version. Needs a more positive ending.