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The red wouldn't look so bad if the blue wasn't in such high contrast... try a background that fits in with the other colors more. Also it's 80's so you can be tacky and cheezy... make the background pattern less subtle.
As far as the message goes... I think it needs a punchline. ie. Just some more text that really drives the message (even if it's a small quote or something). eg. "Each Saturday night come share the ultimate 80s experience at the blah blah"
Just some thoughts - nice work :)