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  • DutchBoy0

    thx stewart.

    the text is not junk. i had a great deal of analysis before i started to create this site, many people ask many things and i wanted to clear things up with this text.

    from the perspective of my client-environment this is the best i can come up with now, i don't have much work in it now, and i do not want to put much in it since i can do lots better -imo- these days... and want to move forward.

    i guess i called it case studies cuz i intended to talk a little about the process etc. cuz i feel i need to educate a lot of clients about what is good for them since they are not very aware of 'good design' here.. :/ (but in the end the textboxes came out a bit small and there was not much room left for copy..)

    but i love living here now so that is why i adapt it a little to the nature of my target audience.

    and yeah, i want to make it sound more&better then what it currently is (in the perception of others) but i know i can live up to expectations.. in other words, trying to target the more challenging clients.

    thx for the compliment on the logo, i wouldn't have expected anyone (on here) to find that one a good logo! :)

    furthermore i have to add that my work generally is quite corporate with extra attention to clean usable solutions in design. i guess it is what i do best. i never felt it would be anything interesting to post here, that is why i wanted to keep it low-profile on this site, as i don't have mad illy's to show, or wicked reels and skate videos and dripping deerheads and what not..

    it's design for the clients' clients.... i try to move into the general feel and culture of a company, thus the concept is based on the result of this analysis, and not from the culture of design itself as i think that is not a good basis to start from...

    to make a long story short, i made this website simply to get work, and hopefully gradually more interesting jobs, and not to impress the design industry itself..
    to be honest i care most about the effect my work has on the clients and their potential clients.

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