copywriting | 3rd person
copywriting | 3rd person
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- lovaboy0
i think that's fine. after reading your copy, the only real complaint i have is not that you use the 3rd person, but that it comes across as just a tad impersonal/ academic sounding, when you should be engaging your potential clients. try for a little more simplicity, and try to juxtapose shorter, bolder sentences with longer ones. your work looks great, btw!