Poster Crit 2
Poster Crit 2
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bluejam:
i was just thinking the same about the telegraph pole.all the lines flow into the pole defining that as the focal point, but the flowers at the edges are more interesting which creates a jarring effect on the eye. maybe if the flowers were wrapped around the pole and taken away from the edges, it might work better compositionally. or you could mute the colours of the edge flowers a bit and have the red flowers going around the pole.
hope that's useful!