Critique my short Flick
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To be honest, I think it's very remeniscent of WDDG's animorph. I like all the cutting a lot, but not so fond of the reverse motion. I think it would work better if it were to jump back without showing the progression, and then just start from there foreward again. I noticed a few spots where the film was slowed down a bit. I think this takes away from the pace of the film. The colors I think are absolutely beautiful. I wish it were longer. Very nice work, I'd be interested to anything else you do with video. I did a trailer for the movie Pi a few years back (assignment for class) if you're interested in seeing it. I probably did exactly what I just told you not to do, but hey, just being honest. I would do this whole thing differently now if I could. Anyway, here's the link: http://www.patrickphegley.com/si… obviously the 19mb file is gonna be the best if you have the time to download it. Thanx for sharing your work, very nice!