Critique my short Flick
Critique my short Flick
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Not bad. I'm no expert in film critiquing but generally I think there needs to be a little more emphasis put on people expressions. There's lots of emotions running around - an occasional "look in her eye" before she pulls the trigger, and "smirk on her face" when she arrives at her friends place. Maybe through some closer closeups, etc.
The music could perhaps pause a little more and change beat after she gets shot.
Like I said - I'm no expert. Excellent job - way outta my league :)