Redesign Crit
Redesign Crit
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- rasko40
there are some anomolies within the copy whereby extra spacing appears on the last line of some para's.
The copy in the main column looks pretty huge on my machine and is generally hard to read and uninspiring, nothing made me want to try, maybe an idea to break up the copy with images or indented quotes enlarged or something, typical editorial tricks.
It does look a bit dull too but thats not a major problem for me as long as you make the content interesting and easier to read.