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  • misterhow6

    For an upcoming show. 'Creating joy inspired by music'

    I've sat on this one for a few weeks. Minor changes today and I think it's finished. Crits are always welcome.

    • I think you can lose the grid, and finesse the type so it follows the perspective better. Maybe a different font too.monospaced
    • text could do with a little loveNairn
    • Only one of them looks 'joyful'.i_monk
    • Maybe more colorsdrgs
    • or more contrast if you're sticking to one palettemonospaced
    • +1 i_monk
      the repeated sneaker detail irks, and is a bit one-dimensional. Also, how long are second from right's arms?
      Nairn
    • vary the strokes on the people a little more perhaps.fadein11
    • Boom box could be more central in the comphoppa74
    • I agree with mono loose the grid, that will help perspective a bit. The rest is crescent fresh!robotron3k
    • +1 on loose the gridrenderedred

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