Show some recent work
Show some recent work
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- Boz1
redesign for something Hitachi motorsports. Love working on their stuff :)
- curious to hear opinions in generalBoz
- Looks incredible to me.dopepope
- Very great. So many quality details.CyBrainX
- I'd love to see the evolution of your work from sketch/wire to this.Mattjanz3n
- Thumbs up..very nicedee-dubs
- excelllent!neverscared
- dope!
just 2 details that bothered me:
-the small 2 line type besides the red squares with numbers (because unreadable in the screenshot)
-it's 2019 (footer)uan - I like the overall vibe...however, there is little attention to detail such as: kerning, image alignment, spacing, etc...utopian
- can't really kern online though... you can, but last time i checked it was really hard work and quite impossible to get it right.uan
- Looks very nice, maybe a little busydmay
- Looks great. I think there is too much copy in some of the modules lower down the page. The module for "tech on the track" is spot on. One sentence.thumb_screws
- nice, man :)PonyBoy
- Boz, this should help you with your grid system. http://gridcalculato…utopian
- not sure about grid, but can tell depth levels in some off and thinking a little extra layering and texturing in comps would help********
- like dude vs car could be equalized, some of the 3d could be better with textures, but overall those minute details ppl mostly ignore********
- think it looks pretty good********
- Nice work. The only thing that bothers me is how bright Josef’s hair is on that dark background. Maybe burn the edges or play with the brightness/contrast.fooler
- Needs tremendously more white space IMO. Way too crammed viewing experience.noRGB
- Some of those copy blocks are multiple paragraphs parading as one wall of text. Convince them no one will read all that textnoRGB
- thanks everyone.. some good comments!Boz
- Nice work man - i would also change your 'Learn more' links to something more directive to the page each is linking topedromendez
- Love it. Bit more white space needed for me.Hayzilla
- Agree with white space comments. Also agree on cutting down/normalizing copy length - show more tell less. Also have some widows in different copy blocks.duckseason
- Do the "plus" symbols do anything or just visual flair? Opening quotation mark in hero is backwards/upside down.duckseason
- Style of visuals/illustration... in lower numbered sections feel a bit disconnected. Numbered sections are weirdly broken up by About section.duckseason
- Corner radius of the button in the About section looks like it could be increased - gittin' nitpicky...duckseason
- I'd also argue the line height/leading in the body copy could be bumped up a bit to help things breathe a bit more.duckseason