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    the font you chose for "high tech & new media club" is arresting the design. that alone needs to tell the viewer what the site is about. high tech and new media contradict a classic serif font.

    i don't necessarily think this is about content limitations - but what you're doing with the content you have.

    the only element you have currently that says high tech is the gradient. that is being neutralized by the big white box you've placed on top of it. and the fonts and how you've arranged them.

    it would help us if we knew exactly what the site was for.

    hope this helps :)

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