Id like some advice please :)
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nice layout. my initial thoughts:
shrink the OMNIUM-SANTE logo on the front to give some room on the left edge. maybe half an inch?i think that a VERY light texture in the white space would really make the whole thing come together and give it a feeling of dimension. something so small can really make a huge difference. as if the white area were really behind the blue overlapping pieces.
same on the back and the front.you've got a nice font on the back cover, but it really doesnt do it for me. (chalk that up to personal preference if you like though) but i would try a simple serif font. i like how it is a very light font though. somethng matching that feel in serif would be my pick.
here's another you can chalk up to personal preference if you like, but the logo on the back really doesnt look like it needs to be centered. and it gives the right hand side of the bottom a pinched look. it might look nice if it was centered from the edge of the blue on the left with the area where the white comes down on the right. sort of centering it on the left 2/3rds of the page. (did that make any sense?)
i really like those shapes though. they make a great playground for type and logos.
anyway, those are just some quick thoughts. lookin good man!