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Out of context: Reply #14

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  • Dolan0

    I read the AM one as QM, and the M in MBR is not legible. I think you need a solution where each half of the M is not as wide as the other singleton letters --- as is it's looking like 4 letterforms not 3. The lineweights iand curves in the underline areas of #1-4 are off. You're jacking your weights when you h-scale in #5, and I don't understand the relationship between the x-height of the B and the other letters in #5-7. Looks off for no good reason. Interlocking custom forms are tough --- I don't mean to sound harsh, just to give you detailed feedback. Keep on busting.

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