folio critique
folio critique
Out of context: Reply #15
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- alicetheblue0
I would like to see at the opening-
A glimpse into you. A feeling. An emotion .... that is you.
(something that separates you from the rest ;)I'm not sure sure whether this theme/ feed works for you?
The rest has been addressed above .
- i agree. i do feel this is missing. it jumps too quickly into the work and makes it feel kind of sterile._salisae_