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- Rufcut0
It's nice but....
I think you can pull the typography in a bit without the client noticing.
It just seems a bit empty and spacious. I dunno if this will feck up as it gets smaller but try pulling the kerning in and moving the two lines closer.
Also the 'a' currently hangs off the logo and doesn't correspond to either of the two lines. So it could be dupuis productions and the 'a' is lost.
Hav you tried using the a next to the dupuis in the speech bubble and then opening up the kerning on the 'productions' so that it becomes almost an underlining?
At the moment it looks like the productions part is saying 'a'... which is a little wierd.
But hey I like it. the client likes it so don't beat yerself up about it. Just fiddle a bit. My money is on the logotype 'a' alongside the 'dupuis' and the 'productions' opened out and underneath.
peace
Ruf