Critique my folio

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  • monNom0

    having all the work competing on one page isn't working for me. better to show one piece at a time so the user can focus. Either paginate or give good separation between pieces on a single long page.

    descriptive text should be visible at all time with no mouse interaction required

    work is nice, but the format feels a bit boring, is it a template? feels like one.

    your textured wordmark styling seems out of place given the super-minimal interface.

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