24-Hour Website Crit
24-Hour Website Crit
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I like the portfolio itself. The logo you did is pretty nice and the single page navigation with big screenshots presents the work in a good light.
The work itself on the other hand has a little too much of a "stock photo" thing going on at times, like on the PG+E illustration. And then a couple pieces where you are showing someone else's portfolio and work. I would try to frontload the site with more distinctive and original work.
- Realize its tough with client work. You can always add in a few self-initiated pieces though.abettertomorrow
- Any other projects induce the 'stock' feel? I understand what you're saying. That project was done a while ago.sisu
- Another example, on the CBS one, I like the bag, and like the middle image on the second page, but the other images just ruin it for me.abettertomorrow
- kind of ruin it IMO.abettertomorrow
- A lot of this is about self editing your work and knowing what to show and what not to:)abettertomorrow
- Yup, thanks. That's what I'm here trying to do.sisu