Made a Short film, Let me know what you think??
Made a Short film, Let me know what you think??
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- epill0
i think for me there is this initial lack of common ground as the main character is being singled out as who he is by his demographic, but then is pushed to be an every day person that is relatable to anyone..
i think that initial disconnect with the direction starting out as this is a british guy, in london..
if you take out that small bit, and make it a location-less arena, then i think the American voice over is fine. otherwise change the voice over to match the content.
at first it was looked at to be a joke on Brits by americans thru the voice over has no real relation to the main subject. try to blend that together more fluid and your work shine that much more.